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sta.sh/028ckny3co8a (I don't have his human/partial refs up yet.)

/ = Partially true
X = True
[[[My thoughts/explanations]]]

[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] This happens to be red
[X] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows (that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They have wings
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Subtotal: 1

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They have an evil nemesis
[] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[/] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[/] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 1

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[/] They are possessed by a demon [[[He's not a demon??? But evil.]]]
[/] But they struggle to be good anyway
[X] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 2

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power (Just the normal Nekomata things so I don't know if it counts as special power??) 
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift [[[It's kinda a species trait so-]]]
[] They are immortal (cannot be killed by conventional means)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] Their soul is not the same as them [[[ He has his own soul and there's soul is linked to his???
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 2

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[/] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[/] They have multiple personalities (x2 if this is shown to be funny) [[[ I guess?]]]
[] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[/] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly [[[depending on Who's controlling I guess]]]
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 1.5

Miscellaneous

[X] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[] They come from two such lines
[] Which have been at war for all of history
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way
[] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition [[[I guess]]]
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 2

Total: 9.5

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0


Final Total: 9.5??

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.  

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.

26> -Mary-Sue

This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu

Part 1 of 6?
Adult dandy sketch
Hello NightSouls15!
(Tagging you correctly when I edit this to make the picture quality better. Aka Imma tag you in like a minute)

This is what vincent might look like if he were an adult -u-
It's just a sketch right now.
I referenced one of AdorkableMarina 's old poses cause I couldn't get the legs right 0-0' ( This one adorkablemarina.deviantart.com… )

(Marina if that was a bad thing to do I'm so sorry I just can't get the leg to paw that well lol I mean I didn't trace or nothin but still ;; )

His left "arm" looks kinda bland but I couldn't tell if he had markings there-
And I didn't wanna add any cause he isn't my character-

Done entirely in pencil on paper.

Ps. Yes I am the Rare eevee.
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sta.sh/028ckny3co8a (I don't have his human/partial refs up yet.)

/ = Partially true
X = True
[[[My thoughts/explanations]]]

[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] This happens to be red
[X] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] Some part of their body glows (that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They have wings
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Subtotal: 1

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They have an evil nemesis
[] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[/] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[/] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 1

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[/] They are possessed by a demon [[[He's not a demon??? But evil.]]]
[/] But they struggle to be good anyway
[X] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 2

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power (Just the normal Nekomata things so I don't know if it counts as special power??) 
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift [[[It's kinda a species trait so-]]]
[] They are immortal (cannot be killed by conventional means)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[X] Their soul is not the same as them [[[ He has his own soul and there's soul is linked to his???
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 2

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[/] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[/] They have multiple personalities (x2 if this is shown to be funny) [[[ I guess?]]]
[] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[/] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly [[[depending on Who's controlling I guess]]]
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 1.5

Miscellaneous

[X] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[] They come from two such lines
[] Which have been at war for all of history
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way
[] They have amnesia
[X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition [[[I guess]]]
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 2

Total: 9.5

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0


Final Total: 9.5??

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.  

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.

26> -Mary-Sue

This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26 on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu

Part 1 of 6?

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SkullyEllz Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017  Student General Artist
Thanks but there's no need to thank me for a Fav or a Watch. <3
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SkullyEllz Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  Student General Artist
I'm not new to the site <3
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